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Clash of the Divorcees

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by Anonymous

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by rixels11/09/16

Right Category

Reducing marriage and family life to violence. Isn't love grand?

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by Anonymous11/09/16

Dream on bitch.

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by Anonymous11/10/16

Contradictions

You can't say, "underground fighting circuit was all he had, his only form of release both during and after their stressful marriage" and have him not know how to fight. This might have worked if you'd made him a novice.

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by sbrooks103x11/11/16

UGH

As the prior comment said, there was NO way that was gonna happen!

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by trigudis11/13/16

Masochistic in the Extreme

Sounds like an exercise in masochism by the hapless ex-husband. Some guys do get off on being bested by women in everything from the cognitive to the physical. Are you one of them?

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by Anonymous11/26/16

Too bad...

she wasn't able (or willing?) to work that hard at making him feel like a man, the man, HER man in the marriage. Truly loving relationships should lift up both partners.

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by Anonymous12/10/16

Shouldn't this be in Fantasy, or Science Fiction?

You're either an angry abused woman dreaming, or a man trying to write his way into the pants of a feminist. I hopes its the latter. No woman should be treated in a way that would make her this angry, and violent.

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