All Comments on 'Ski Trip'

You've written an engaging story with very believable dialog. Write more.

Good stuff... keep 'em coming.

I liked the story lots, and got wet. You are a very good writer. You forgot to give me your e-mail addy or a link to the story, so I had to do the search thingie and it was all confusin and stuff. I forgive you cause the story was freakin hot. Write more please, Lisa.

Good story, very hot. I hope to see more from you.

Amazing story. Very nice approach of the non-touching period. Very progressive action and not outright forseeable scenario. Although there is no clear climax this not only does not reduce the quality but also adds to the bi-ness and climate of uncertainty of the story, as I have perceived it. I enjoyed it very much and i declare myself a fan of the kind.

Wait. What? If one of them had a boyfriend then their intent of this trip was to cheat? Since no dude was available they rubbed each other to bliss? Based on information from the story I ask: Why be in a relationship? Be single and screw whoever you want.