This was write not excellent. He say not make cents. i will gratefruit spoon dig my eyes. Will lesbian she ass with his chicken and went.
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Anonymous11/08/16
It was OK but I was hoping for a longer chapter with more in it. Needs to have more story to complement the amount of sex.
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Anonymous11/08/16
getting worse
WTF? i must of missed something? Who is the "Queen" and where are they & why did she enter the story?
hostess dies on plane no explanation as to why how the reason etc
the story is so stupid/Dumb/makes no sense! its like watching those B movies the worst movies ever made! this crap is So bad have to read next chapter just too see if can get any worse
English
not seeing much incest here
I want comment on story bad
This was write not excellent. He say not make cents. i will gratefruit spoon dig my eyes. Will lesbian she ass with his chicken and went.
It was OK but I was hoping for a longer chapter with more in it. Needs to have more story to complement the amount of sex.
getting worse
WTF? i must of missed something? Who is the "Queen" and where are they & why did she enter the story?
hostess dies on plane no explanation as to why how the reason etc
the story is so stupid/Dumb/makes no sense! its like watching those B movies the worst movies ever made! this crap is So bad have to read next chapter just too see if can get any worse
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