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Good, BUT!
So, he sees that she's submissive, but the first thing he does is go down on her? He should of had her begging to swallow him like she did the fat prick.
This was a good read, but you can do better. Do another chapter and have Tim really take over, tell the fat prick he will show the tape of him blackmailing the slut so Tim keeps her for himself.
Interesting
but not one of your best.
Wimpy, watching husbands really turn me off.
Tit for Tat was so great, then this??????
Now they can blackmail Becker
He has film of Becker blackmailing his wife, which they can use against him.
Not as good as your other stories
I'll just stay here and watch another man fuck my wife. And I will experience what all watching men do, I will come in my pants. I won't kick the guys ass or show my wife the video and decide what I'm going to do about her sluttiness.
Wait, maybe I can watch my wife get fucked by other men. Hopefully they will tie me up and humiliate me too.
C'mon, man! You write stories so well and so different from the regular crap-writers on this site. Don't sink to their level, make them write up to your level.
Great sentiments from Sherlock
Mr Author please listen to him.
It would be a real shame if your talent was wasted on stupid stories.
Please, as Sherlock says, make the others aspire to your high level, DON'T DROP TO THEIR'S.
I don't know
why a good writer like you would write these stupid slut,cuckold and wimp stories.
Great Story
Outstanding effort. Pay no regard to the comments that disparaged your wonderful work. It's very hot, and there is nothing wrong this this kind of story. Sensual, sexual and very, very hot. Keep up the good work.
YOU DIDN'T ASK WHO SLUT SHE WAS
NOW WHO SLUT IS SHE ,BECKER OR HUBBYS.
Why did he wait and not intervene?
I wouldn't have let it get that far! He could have intervened and delt with her another way! What happened to the blackmailing bastard?
Thanks for writing!
Sexmate
She learned a lesson
Her husband saw his wife learn a lesson, in the prossess learn how to handle his wife. Mr Becker may come around again and get Ann, because his honoring her and giving her the tape of her wrong doing in the store.
He loves her
that's why he gave her oral when he saw her -- a man who loves his wife should dominate her if that's what she likes/needs, but he doesn't need to stop acting loving. What a lucky woman.
Moronic
Yeah, he taught her a lesson allright, now he and his piece of shit whore wife have aids from the unprotected sex with the manager.....this story is shit.
Speaking From Experience
...I have worked for many years in the retail Security industry. I am a sworn Private Peace Officer in New York City. My function is to perform arrest and search duties for a major NYC department store (no name here). I have worked there for 14 years.
Special have the same authority as any peace officer in the State of New York, so long as we are within our assigned work location and at our regularly assigned shifts. We can carry firearms (I do) by permit(separate gun license)but they are difficult to get in NYC, the same as for anybody else.
Surveillance tapes or surveillance files by computerized video systems are NOT admissable as evidence unless the theft in question is also witnessed by another pwerson, and IN PERSON. This is a decision in law that was passed down by the United States Supreme Court some years ago.
This is becaus such tapes are so very easy to fake. And so was this story. If I catch you, you're staying caught. And I do not care what your "big breasts" look like. I could go to jail for far, far longer than you if you give me nookie to forget your crime.
And the loss to me of my job and the trust placed in me by the law-enforcement community makes such a thing totally not worth it. I cannot see it by a tech company owner either.Most of us are so straight-laced about stuff like this that I can't see this scenario either.
Mr.Cock, this is Mrs. Krane, can you hear me?
The "blackmailed" wife is made to talk directly to the source of her pleasures... A hilarious part of this early HDK, already showing some of the future treasures to be found in later stories…
We can also learn about HDK's special interest in the themes of voyeurism, voluntary cuckoldry and mild humiliation (the husband admonishes himself for not knowing his wife and he admits how much he learned as a result of the voyeuristic experience).
In later stories we see less and less of that part in the spectrum of HDK interests (thank god…). Perhaps it is due to the give and take process with the readers: hearing the requests and listening to feedbacks. Thanks HDK for your flexibility!
Tthankfully, you improved in later years
encouraging to see how bad your stories were when you first started writing and see how much you improved in later years.
60 year old George
wife of 22 years
old hide = 1*.
Lame
He recorded the blackmail conversation but let him nail his wife anyway? This isn't a revenge story. It's about a sissy cuck who likes to watch his wife bang other men.
Hmm, this wimp husband kink of yours isn't my cup of tea, I'm sorry to say. Before I read more of your stories with that theme, I'll better go elsewhere.
Wimpy Cuck
As soon as he saw her going along with the blackmail he HAD to come out and kick some ass!
The fact that he actually CAME watching her submit shows just how worthless he is.
A very well written story...
But I'm seeing a trend that is causing me to wonder why I favorite listed this author to begin with. As well written as the story may be, it seems that they all center around an level of acceptance of (if not outright desire for) cuckolding (as a fetish). I'll likely read a couple more stories, starting with the sequel to this one, to be sure, but if they turn out as I'm starting to believe then I may be forced to drop this author from my favorite list since it's not my bag.
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