Not a story for the purists but what good fun. Good story. Thanks.
Very Enjoyable. Very Well Written. Great Imagination. Dialogue and Rhyme on Spot! Do You write professionally or are You a scholar? i'm quite curious if You'd share how long it took to compose and edit this Holiday Tale?
A lovely story.
Very cute story of a different nature. Imaginative and nicely done. This took a great deal of thought and time. Good Luck in the competition.
Really enjoyed it. Novel, interesting - generally five +++ stars.
Loved the premise, the rhyming prose, the mythological references. The scenes, and the pacing! My favorite holiday story so far!
What a fun, novel, and intriguing story! I signed up on Literotica just so I could favorite and comment on this story.
Very creative, loved the concept. Good luck .
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Good Fun
Not a story for the purists but what good fun. Good story. Thanks.
Quite Satisfying
Very Enjoyable. Very Well Written. Great Imagination. Dialogue and Rhyme on Spot!
Do You write professionally or are You a scholar?
i'm quite curious if You'd share how long it took to compose and edit this Holiday Tale?
Lovely.
A lovely story.
Nicely Done! Imaginative and Refreshing
Very cute story of a different nature. Imaginative and nicely done. This took a great deal of thought and time. Good Luck in the competition.
So very different.
Really enjoyed it. Novel, interesting - generally five +++ stars.
What fun!
Loved the premise, the rhyming prose, the mythological references. The scenes, and the pacing! My favorite holiday story so far!
Imaginative and well-written!
What a fun, novel, and intriguing story! I signed up on Literotica just so I could favorite and comment on this story.
Loved it
Very creative, loved the concept. Good luck .
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