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by Syndra Lynn05/27/04

I love

these words:

tears dripping across Spanish moss
awakens somber ravenwing beneath

There is a story here I am not quite grasping, but it is mythical and Celtic and I like it.

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by tarablackwood2205/28/04

Smooth..

...as silk. Rolls off the tongue and into the ear like a gentle breeze. Lovely!

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