Please write more like this. This was hot.
Implausible plot made even worse by poor English and apparently no proofreading. Keep trying - you might get better - might. Shoreguy
> She had turned 21 a few months back, but her body was that of an adult No shit, Sherlock? Guess what: 21 *is* an adult… >_< Oh, and by the way: when you write a rape story, please tell about it in the tags or the category. Some of us aren’t into that…
I think it needed more detail and I agree add if its rape
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Please write more like this. This was hot.
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Implausible plot made even worse by poor English and apparently no proofreading. Keep trying - you might get better - might.
Shoreguy
> She had turned 21 a few months back, but her body was that of an adult
No shit, Sherlock? Guess what: 21 *is* an adult… >_<
Oh, and by the way: when you write a rape story, please tell about it in the tags or the category. Some of us aren’t into that…
It was ok
I think it needed more detail and I agree add if its rape
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