All Comments on 'Hotel Ballroom'

Short and to the point. I liked it.

Another good idea ruined by poor grammar ! You need a proofreader who has English as a first language.

Shoreguy

If the gentleman truly wanted to help he would of given me his name. He could be my proof reader. But no. Just bitch and moan.

i loved the story . loved forbidden fruit and reading it through a sexy womans eyes

Very hot and intense love the fact it was in a public place but yet has the delicious secrecy of it being late at night in the ballroom, the illicit liaison, that made the story much more sexually heated...