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High School Senior Class Trip Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/19/16

Can we forget about the bee sting shit and just get to the point? What is stoning them and who is doing it?

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by Anonymous11/20/16

Too Short, Too Repetitious, Too Everything, It Seems...

I particularly enjoyed the previous comment.

I just read all 5 chapters and it was like reading the first one over and over again (with minor changes). I know you are trying to muster up suspense about who is doing this and why, but it just isn't interesting. The characters are very simplistic and the situations they find themselves in are too ridiculous to be believed. Nice try, but I don't think I'll be around to read another boring chapter. Sorry.

Roger.

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