Desiree

Urm .... No

More consensual rubbish passed of as non consensual. Why do people here not know what non consensual means!!!!!

Put this in mind control

Yum

Very well written ;)

So just because a girl is drunk and doesn't say no, it's not non con? Then you can attack random people from behind and assault them? No wonder there's so many sex crimes in the country.

This is fiction

It's very well written, and something that can very plausibly happen. He had drugged her drink so she couldn't say no. So it's still non con.

Author, you did a great job. Some people are just very closed minded.

A promising beginning

Not a bad start. Though I would recommend that you refrain from using "penis" and "vagina" no one's uses those terms. This seems to be a habit you have. They creep into your stories from time to time.