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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
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fifty5fifty5over 7 years ago
Needs an editor

The basic idea behind this story is good, and a lot of how it is written, but there are innumerable minor flaws. A good editor will correct the flaws and you will have a story that is ten times as good.

Best wishes for your future as a Litauthor,

Eff

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