by maestro84
Please proof read or have someone proof read your stories before you post them. The mistakes and grammatical errors in this story cost you two stars.
One page chapters are a bind, a pain in the aese, you only need a new chapter for a new happening in the story.
This whole thing just keeps repeating itself like groundhog day and is getting boring so unless something changes soon i is nor reading much more.
The start was great but after chapter 5/6 its not doing nowt for me yea !!
Lets see yea ?