All Comments on 'Mine Ch. 08'

I have been waiting 4 a story like this. But I do hope she gets to kick his ass in the end, this guy is too much

Ok he's hot,but he treats her so badly,it's scarey.I hope he learns to respect her more,cause right now,he doesn't have one redeeming quality except his good looks.

I've been following this story from the beginning and it keeps getting better. Keep it coming cause I'm hungry for more.

keep it coming!!! Wish I had your talent with words! I love it.

Man, that really sucks she got caught. I was really hoping she could get away. And now he's pissed. Geez... I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter. I wish her the best of luck cuz she's going to need it. Jake is one scary bastard!

I want to like him but it's hard to. I hate the mean way he treats her. I hope you'll be able to redeem him because he's sexy and they could be good together. This story sure has my attention. Eagerly awaiting the next episode.

she was so close!!! ^_^. hopefully he'll soften up a bit. But goodnes i just love to hate this man. You know what you've got talent, their right this should be a novel.

Pleeeeasssseee i'm dying to know what happens next!

Can hardly wait to see the next installment. So come on out of that state of confusion and give us a conclusion. Puhleeze Miss Eve!

this story is kinda of creepy. also i wish that Narissa wouldn't be shared

Jake is crazy.....I mean super crazy....why did she run....this is a good story!

Umm he's a psycho

That motherfucker is a fucking pysco, your a good writer man but this shits crazy make her kill herself or something.

Your writing is amazing...I just can't stop reading this