All Comments on 'My Sister's Boyfriend Comes Home'

How do I know your name?? From the Forum perhaps. But about the story, I found it to be just a little slam bam nothing but the facts mam! I had hoped for better.

could have made it a little more interesting taking off your clothes maybe him going down on you, by the looks of your picture I would spend a lot of time worshiping those tits before eating that sweet pussy till you had at least 3 orgasms before fucking you bareback giving you my load of cum

not bad for someone who just started writing

You are not writing a report. Be a little more descriptive.

Congrats on first story. You'll get better as you keep writing

Well done on writing your first story! A sexy, promising start!