that I would have gone straight for the dark side. I haven't hit a girl since the 7th grade but I believe I would have made an exception in that case. As for the husband, as he ran by I think maybe rupture his nuts too, that way he won't have as much of a problem assimilating into his role in prison, gang bitch. And I would bet that with her attitude and propensity for bondage that the wife will be a very popular toy in her own right.
Well written and flowed well and quickly to the point. I gave you 5 stars just for the testosterone that you allowed to seep into your story.
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Anonymous11/15/16
I read 3 short stories today.
Two of them were pathetic, this; however, was not one of them. This was a great little flash story. 5 stars. I loved it.
It was interesting and well written but the classification guaranteed more attention than would normally be given to say , a novelette. Note there is no sex or wife in the story.
Well written tight story. Liked it! 5*. But the category??? I'm not sure it belongs on loving wife's maybe better in nonconsensual reluctance. Still all in all a great start.
Now how about a prologue ok f the initial rape of his sister or other victims . Then maybe trow out an epilogue of the rapist being raped. Maybe the man turned into a transvestite bitch and the woman a lesbian prostitute. Hmm many possibilities.
Thank you for the story.
If you read it more carefully, he isn't saying that HE was having those fantasies.
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Anonymous11/16/16
A neat flash story with a warm fuzzy ending.
Of course experienced successful rapists would have ditched the mark and took off as soon as the partner became difficult. Still, its always fun to fantasize about scum bags getting busted.
A very good flash story...All rapist deserve the worst pain in the world...4*
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Anonymous11/30/16
Nice original solution to an old scenario.
Thanks for the testosterone and justice. To the category kvetchers, as the story runs it is LW POV up until the denouement, it looks/feels like a wife is about to cheat on hubby. Hence LW. Please keep writing sir!
English
ALL GAMES HAVE RULES
along with winners and losers. TK U MLJ LV NV
PERVERTS
Every one who writes or reads a story here is a sexual pervert in some form.
Why all the moral outrage???
Interesting twist
Yup, that was different.
Almost Quit
I almost quit at the start, thought it was going to be some cuck shit.
Glad I was wrong!
Short
Nice short story. No emotional involvement- that would have taken longer to set up, but short and sweet. Interesting idea to play with
Nice cop story
They got that those rapists. In real Iife I bet it never happens. These two perverts likely never get caught. Drugged and abused.
Flash
Not a bad little flash story. Interesting twist.
I liked your story, but I have to say
that I would have gone straight for the dark side. I haven't hit a girl since the 7th grade but I believe I would have made an exception in that case. As for the husband, as he ran by I think maybe rupture his nuts too, that way he won't have as much of a problem assimilating into his role in prison, gang bitch. And I would bet that with her attitude and propensity for bondage that the wife will be a very popular toy in her own right.
Well written and flowed well and quickly to the point. I gave you 5 stars just for the testosterone that you allowed to seep into your story.
I read 3 short stories today.
Two of them were pathetic, this; however, was not one of them. This was a great little flash story. 5 stars. I loved it.
How did this one get classified as Loving Wives?
It was interesting and well written but the classification guaranteed more attention than would normally be given to say , a novelette. Note there is no sex or wife in the story.
Nice story but category?
Well written tight story. Liked it! 5*. But the category??? I'm not sure it belongs on loving wife's maybe better in nonconsensual reluctance. Still all in all a great start.
Now how about a prologue ok f the initial rape of his sister or other victims . Then maybe trow out an epilogue of the rapist being raped. Maybe the man turned into a transvestite bitch and the woman a lesbian prostitute. Hmm many possibilities.
Thank you for the story.
@Anonymous Re: hotwife/cuckold fantasies
If you read it more carefully, he isn't saying that HE was having those fantasies.
A neat flash story with a warm fuzzy ending.
Of course experienced successful rapists would have ditched the mark and took off as soon as the partner became difficult. Still, its always fun to fantasize about scum bags getting busted.
add more pain to curprit
add more to the curprit
If only anon had read the story!
The couple ARE man and wife.
They worked together to catch the rape couple.
This was an interesting twist to the story and worth 5*.
Idiotic shit!!! MINUS 5*!!
What an ass would write such a crap??!!
crap
you gota be stupid to write a story like that
made me not want to wank ever again...........
Ummmm..
What's a curprit?
A very good flash story...
A very good flash story...All rapist deserve the worst pain in the world...4*
Nice original solution to an old scenario.
Thanks for the testosterone and justice. To the category kvetchers, as the story runs it is LW POV up until the denouement, it looks/feels like a wife is about to cheat on hubby. Hence LW. Please keep writing sir!
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