which one was cheating first?
some where i missed that part
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Anonymous11/15/16
From the way you wrote the story
I don't like either one... And I don't care which one cheated first... they are both paper thin characters with multiple, flaws and not worth developing.
by
Anonymous11/16/16
4* I Thought It Was Fun!
It was a fun story. Any man who has fucked an older, or substantially younger woman (I've done both) would identify with it and find it interesting.
This is a place of fiction stories, right? Relax and enjoy folks!
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Anonymous11/16/16
Nice story.
Next time make the sex more descriptive...5* anyway.
by
Anonymous11/16/16
wtf
why is there still a marriage???
oh wait she doesn't wont to work, she would rather prostitute herself for the paycheck
this is a bleak shit story
by
Anonymous11/16/16
So what is the plot? Is this just a revenge fuck story?
OK, she's getting her revenge. I'm cool with that. Thanks for sharing?
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Anonymous11/16/16
To the point!
A loved it! Just what was needed...Nothing more...nothing less...In one chapter only ! Precise! Keep going on this path! A good and rare skill...to be precise!
English
Good story
About time for a burn the husband story.Thanks
"Your welcome,"????
That is the problem with this story. You probably don't even realize what's wrong. Find an editor. What about tenses?
Dear Anonymous
Are you offering your services as an editor, hmmm?
which one was cheating first?
some where i missed that part
From the way you wrote the story
I don't like either one... And I don't care which one cheated first... they are both paper thin characters with multiple, flaws and not worth developing.
4* I Thought It Was Fun!
It was a fun story. Any man who has fucked an older, or substantially younger woman (I've done both) would identify with it and find it interesting.
This is a place of fiction stories, right? Relax and enjoy folks!
Nice story.
Next time make the sex more descriptive...5* anyway.
wtf
why is there still a marriage???
oh wait she doesn't wont to work, she would rather prostitute herself for the paycheck
this is a bleak shit story
So what is the plot? Is this just a revenge fuck story?
OK, she's getting her revenge. I'm cool with that. Thanks for sharing?
To the point!
A loved it! Just what was needed...Nothing more...nothing less...In one chapter only ! Precise! Keep going on this path! A good and rare skill...to be precise!
Only idiotic!!! Minus 5*!!!
What a bunch of crap!!!
These two cheaters deserve each other...
These two cheaters deserve each other...Being married to each other means only one marriage ruined...1*
Satisfaction!
God bless you Mrs. Hammond and keep you safe!
That ...
That good old boy is thinking she is doing with out
Infedelity
Two wrongs don't make a right.
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