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by Anonymous11/18/16

The story was promising but now.. I'm not even going to touch upon the many stereotypes/ cliches. The biggest flaw I see is that there's so character development that would make the reader believe that chloe is in love with logan. Its just not believable

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by Anonymous11/19/16

Logan should listen to his Mom

Though if she clearly thinks her son did wrong by Chloe, how/why did she bring up her son to behave so callously?

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