Brother's Dick: A Virginity Lost

I hope to see all 3 stories. Really looking forward to caught by mom.

Great start to a fun series

Damn i enjoyed this one a lot, and now there are 3 (or more) stories to look forward to. Just keeping y fingers crossed that mom won't loose her shit when she catches them :)

5* with ease!

Seeing a pattern

Yes this was a good story as usual. Yes you have good followups planned as usual. Yes you have another story with great potential as usual. But at some point you need to actually use these potential followups and finish them up. Or at least move them along some. How long has backseat mom been sitting? Or how about kinky tales? We LOVE your stories but could at some point start to progress some of them? Sometimes we need more than a season ending cliffhanger. Thanks.

Always wanting more

Love your stories, I check almost everyday for new updates. Thanks!

Author's Note

To 'seeing a pattern'
I try to write sequels based on requests from readers. For example there have been six parts to Backseat Mommy...and three to kinky tales (but neither of the most recent parts have the same comments or requests as earlier parts).

To be truthful, nay story that gets a 100 comments or a lot of email requests is where I try to go... thus why 'A Sister Surprise' has a sequel already written and in editing, even though I didn't leave suggestions for that one, but it got tons of comments.

Bride submission I had given up on as the reds and scores were lower than my norm, yet I get the most requests for that series, thus after 2 years I juts released part 3, which also isn't doing overalls well.

My point is, writing sequels is more difficult and thus I pick and choose.... plus inbetweeen my contest entries and new ideas....


Thanks jasmine

Very good but not winning

Liked it as I do most of you writing. Just not as good as J & J Twins but very close. Maybe your follow ups will move higher.

You Keep Writing And I'll Keep Reading !!! Another 5

I just LOVE your stories!! You have such a creative mind, (from experience?) that it gets me tingly all over until I have to enjoy some self love in order to finish the story. *sigh* Please keep writing!

Good story

An interesting story ...
In particular, I consider that for other following chapters, the story could be continued with the options that the author succeeds, first: Addicted to Cock
In the following chapter: Anal Exploration
And continue with: Caught by Mom and she join us.
Anyway, I do not want to put pressure on the author (not too much, at least).
I give you 5* and waiting more chapters.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Easy

5 stars! Build up was great and finish gave definitive proof of more to comu.

I always check th profile of authors I read. Easy to see why you love stockins...you look sexy in them.

Lee2012

Do all the follow ups...

I'd honestly say do all of the follow ups as I really enjoyed this, but if I had to pick one it would be the first, addicted to cock. Great sorry, as always.

Anal!

I'm a big anal fan so I vote the next one be anal training, please. Also, I loved this story, such a great tale of discovery and exploration!

It's

really a lovly licky dicky.

and again as the Eagle fly's giving two talons up.
It's a "hard candy Christmas."
as Dolly would sing.

Amazing

This was a great story I loved her slowly building up throughout the story it made it feel more believable and I just loved the story throughout please add the new additions as soon as possible

All 3!!!

Start with anal, followed by addiction to cock, followed by caught by mom…seems a natural progression to me…could also flip flip the first two…

Great Story

I don't agree with everything but the story picks up in the middle and ends great..just like sex

Awesome story

Great story can't wait for the follow up, it's hard to pick one follow up wish you could do all of them :-)

self discovery

Another great story by my favorite author. Glad she found her true self and became the submissive cocksucker for her brother. Can\t wait for the sequels to this story

Full marks!

Yet another superb tale by the master. I agree with the others... write all three sequels.

Great

Story it move along very nicely, however are you still virgin if you popped your cherry? having a real cock for the first time "yes" but no hymen.
She better get on birth control so she can feel the joy of having him cum inside her.
For me you can skip the Anal and go right to mom finding them.

Awsome

A great story by a gifted writer. I look forward to your other renditions on this theme.
I will certainly recommend your stories.

Yes, more

All of the above, with mom joining the siblings in their incestuous behavior in that last story. Please....

Oh so fucking sucking sexy

Oh my god just love your stories, so fucking hot, this took my girl friend and I to insane levels of pleasure that caused us to pass out for a couple of minutes. As soon as we came round we did it over again, the intense and insane pleasure was so fucking crazy we passed out for nearly 20 mins. We now both want to find a virgin cunt and virgin cock toplaythis out with, so hedonistically depraved. 10 stars. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.

Great

Please write more

All follow-ups please and then some more!

All follow-ups please and then some more!

FINALLY !

At last, after more than 2,000years - for all the women the world over - specific, step-by-step instructions on how to masturbate. Beautiful, fabulous ! Jaz, another five star contest winner for sure, Now, how about a story prefaced with similar jerk-off instructions for men. I know... I know... but if anyone can do it, you can. Love your shiny silk stockings.
Jack Auff

Yes

I loved like them all so write them all

Great story

Great story, pkease write more. Then to add chance mom finds out

Another Great

As always your stories are well written and vivid please continue this thread

Wow

You have done it again! Excellent background, fun build up, and more than sexually exciting climax (yes, i went there). More please.😆

Very good

Love your story very well written would love to read all three follow ups

Excellent! and, this is from a guy who doesn't usually go for incest stories. :-)

Special!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Very well written. I look forward to reading the sequels. Thank you!

This story is amazing, just amazing.

great story

Hope the next chapters com soon.

As always your stories are the best.

Never disappointing

SSL - as I have said many times before, your stories are always a first class raving success!!! My poor cock almost didn't make it alive through this one - and me being an only child - explains the reason why I had to stop reading three times to clean up my cumshots!! I actually fantasized this kind of thing when I was about fourteen years old.
FUCK, young lady, you must be the best fuck who ever lived to be able to write this stuff - presumably from experience - and believe me, I would LOVE to experience some of this kind of fucking with you1

Great story, plus idea

Great Christmas Story. Really gets you into the holiday spirit. For the next part have them caught by mom coming home early and the father coming home the next day so it gives mom some time to spend some personal time with her kids. Then at the end hint that after the holiday break is over she's gonna make more of her fantasize a reality, like her basically becoming a slut for her schools teams to use.

Can't wait for future chapters

Great story from veggies to delight

Another amazing erotic work of art

You are truly a gifted writer of erotica. I enjoy all of your stories and rate this in the top 5. Truly one of your very best works.

anal exploration follow-up pleasee

i absolutely loved it! i cant wait to read the follow up!

So Shallow

Shallow with no sense of how to build a character, or a story for that matter.
This one is good for those who want to be told how to jerk off without the worry of content.
Just jump in for instant gratification. Because it ain't close to real world.

Great foundation story...

Looking forward to those three potential additions and others...very enjoyable read. Thank you and thank you for sharing.

Author Note

The story doesnt take place in the 1950s... she simply dresses like a girl from the 50s.

Anal next please!!! And make her into a real slut also, fucking multiple guys.

Thank you

Not bad, any of the ideas that you decide to expand would be welcomed. I'm curious to see what you choose?

Good read

Hey good start. Mom definitely needs to catch them in the act. The possibilities are endless

Yes please!

Thanks for the awesome story! I hope mom catches her getting fucked in the ass. I'd love to have her end up under her daughter sucking cunt and cock alternately as he fucks between his sisters ass and cunt and his mom's mouth.

Good start

It's a good start for sure. I'm not sure that bringing in the mother is a good idea, but any new chapter will be welcomed!

TOO MUCH INANE CHATTER TO START THE STORY

SO YOU LOST ME BEFORE IT GOT A GOOD START. AND I BELIEVE IT NEVER WOULD. MAYBE YOU ARE TRYING TO HARD TO HAVE HER BE COOL INSTEAD OF THE NERD SHE'LL ALWAYS BE.