I've seen several authors use the word gauzy to describe fabric. While it is a very descriptive word, I don't think it's a good choice. Gauze is not a nice material. It isn't soft or smooth. Why not just say that she draped a baby blanket or cloth diaper over herself while breastfeeding?
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Anonymous11/19/16
Great storyline
At one person who heated it so much is against sex within the family. Or maybe he hates all sex. Too bad for him and he should leave this site. I wonder if he Jenks off in the c
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Brotherly Love
Hot story
Good story
This was a good story. The guy who said it was crap is an idiot. Keep making stories. Really enjoyed it.
Word choice
I've seen several authors use the word gauzy to describe fabric. While it is a very descriptive word, I don't think it's a good choice. Gauze is not a nice material. It isn't soft or smooth. Why not just say that she draped a baby blanket or cloth diaper over herself while breastfeeding?
Great storyline
At one person who heated it so much is against sex within the family. Or maybe he hates all sex. Too bad for him and he should leave this site. I wonder if he Jenks off in the c
Excellent
Definitely keep up the great writing! And would love it if you continued the story.
amazing story
what a birthday treat
Great story.
Don't you just love the Anonymous COWARDS! An interesting story line. Lots of different ways that you could go with this... PLEASE DO!
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