All Comments on 'Merry Christmas Daddy'

The story was good if not predictable. The back ground however cameoff rather clinical and seemed like a bad way to start.you could have had a solid story without including it.

I dont know what exactly to say, how to articulate it but, that, for me, that story was incredibly sad. No hard-on here. I couldn't even score it, just kinda sad.....l

Tell me the story continues please tell me that :)

I'm beginning to wonder, seriously, about this author. He/she seems incapable of producing any thing approaching a decent story, and - with this new tale - has scored a new low in erotic tales.

First, there's the "See Spot run." paragraphs, most of which were only one sentence long. Then, there was the droll dialogue. Finally, there was the unexpectedly sad ending to the tale - instead of staying with her long-lost father, she'd rather continue being a high-priced prostitute.

I gave this story a solid "1", only because Literotica doesn't allow negative numbers for rating submissions. It's really about a -10, in my opinion. It's also the last story by this author, that I'm going to bother reading. I've come to the conclusion that reading any more submissions by this author would be a waste of my time.

The story was a bit depressing and did go on predictably. More detailed sex and something happy is all I can honestly write. I've seen the plot on TV a few times and some sort of outside fun activity always helped a bit. The -10 remark was left by a zit faced juvenile that can't get it up unless entertained by his own witty put-down. Keep writing and put some depth into a story.

RS

This story sounds like it was written by a kid...one in about the 8th grade.

The story moved right along.

I hope there is more to this story coming

she should quit and live with him

I enjoyed the story but the ending kinda sucked/didn't really make sense. She found love, great sex and her daddy all in one. But then she leaves because she enjoys living a lifestyle of meaningless sex with strangers?? Makes zero sense. Even had anal sex to make their relationship "real" or whatever. Stupid ending, in my opinion. Would love if you changed the ending but it is your work so whatever you want/enjoy