New Girl

Fantastic!

This story was so hot! Honestly, I love how you wrote Jasmine. It was paced well, and there was almost nothing that broke the suspension of disbelief for me... except the cherry bit. That was kind of weird. Anyway, 5 ☆'s!

What was this?

I did not understand your point. She was a virgin preyed upon by these two guys, didn't want the sex but then she did. Where is this going if its going anywhere? I'm left a bit perplexed.

Desiree I understood, this not so much...

You must be a Trump supporter

You want to grab pussy too!!!!

Idiot.

Awesome idea but....

...it sucks. Yeah, some people get off on deflowering but it's just ridiculous how she cried one second and suddenly she was having best sex evaa! I mean, come on...

Great Story!

I liked it a lot, it was very well written and the use of imagery was very pleasing. Good job, definitely worth 5 stars!

Try something else

Rape is one line I won't cross so I didn't care much for the story.

Childish couldnt get into it and stopped midway

Lol why

Do people read this if they don't like this kind of story?

I gave you 5 stars, I liked it. Obviously would be shit in real life but it's a fantasy. I like the kiss at the end.

Don't mind the whining.

Well done. Pay no attention to the anonymous compliants. Keep up the good work.

This is good!