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by monabologna11/19/16

Part 1?

Your writing's not bad (more proofreading would be a good idea though) but please mark the story as being the first of a series if that's what you're planning. It's a good start but just that...a start. I imagine most readers would prefer to know that going in.

Can't wait for Chapter 2!

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by Anonymous11/20/16

I agree

I agree with the pervious comments. This is a good start however it levs. Want now?

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by 63lsmith11/22/16

MORE?

Would like more of Angle, away from the tattoo store and some action is badly needed.

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by Anonymous11/26/16

Monotonous and in need of serious editing.

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