this is every married man's dream who has a daughter or stepdaughter. if you say no you are lying. every man wants to do his daughter or stepdaughter and his wife's sister.
this is just the facts of life.
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Anonymous11/20/16
Absolutely horrible punctuation. I could go on, but why bother?
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Anonymous11/20/16
needs punctuation and grammer work and to stop there is complete craziness.
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Anonymous11/20/16
Stopped reading barely into it.
I stopped the moment I saw "u" used for "you". That is lazy and stupid.
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Anonymous11/20/16
the part where u is used is to show they r texting
The parts where u is used is to show they are texting
Despite the misspelled words and lack of punctuation, the story was progressing nicely. I would have liked to see a little more teasing and playfulness when he and the step daughter were on the couch but to end it like that is very strange. Did he fuck her? Did they have a threesome? Can't end a story like after building up to that point.
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Anonymous11/21/16
Bored
The lack of punctuation and set up had me losing the will to stroke, Better to plan a story out first !
dream come true
this is every married man's dream who has a daughter or stepdaughter. if you say no you are lying. every man wants to do his daughter or stepdaughter and his wife's sister.
this is just the facts of life.
Absolutely horrible punctuation. I could go on, but why bother?
needs punctuation and grammer work and to stop there is complete craziness.
Stopped reading barely into it.
I stopped the moment I saw "u" used for "you". That is lazy and stupid.
the part where u is used is to show they r texting
The parts where u is used is to show they are texting
Odd ending
Despite the misspelled words and lack of punctuation, the story was progressing nicely. I would have liked to see a little more teasing and playfulness when he and the step daughter were on the couch but to end it like that is very strange. Did he fuck her? Did they have a threesome? Can't end a story like after building up to that point.
Bored
The lack of punctuation and set up had me losing the will to stroke, Better to plan a story out first !
Can't wait for you to finish the next chapter
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