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Basic Shadow Ch. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Nakatosh11/24/16

Yes!!!

Love the new series. So happy to see Cassie getting involved. Can't wait to see how she helps out

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by Anonymous11/24/16

This story just keeps getting better. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

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by Captain_Fapulus11/24/16

Dee Dee ain't so small anymore

It's so very exciting to see Dee Dee succeed both in public and private sector, and it was all thanks to their (almost) bankrupt home town. Positive surprise was the willingness of the government party to go with her proposed plan, having to deal with them daily myself it was a very welcome change of pace and persona on their part (aside from that Hennessey dope). Now she'll be the personification of nightmare for financial scumbags everywhere she goes and George will be the big bad gorilla watching her back :)

The other ever so delightful part of the story is that Dee Dee is now openly talking about being with George and wishing for that ideal home life they already have and that the baby will mess up beautifully, even that jab at leaving him didn't faze her. Guess the time for them to come clean to folks outside of her office is coming ever closer and I'm really looking forward to it.

As per usual I gave the story a 5* though I would rate it higher if possible for the simple factor of fun the whole expansion of her office (could it be called a brand by now?) had brought. Guess the baby isn't the only thing they'll have to get used to.

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by beachbum195811/24/16

Enjoying where this is going

As usual, your unhurried pace and storytelling skills are unfolding the story without info-dumping, and it's much appreciated. This has long been one of my favourite stories, and now that it's gathering pace and momentum,and Dee Dee's found her feet (and her voice, too) I'm foreseeing big things for her and George, quite apart from the impending familyhood they're about to experience.

I gave you 5 stars, I wish it could be more, please keep the momentum going, there's obviously so much more to be said.

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by Freddog660111/26/16

Excellent continuation of the story!

This is a very enjoyable read given the solid characters, good plots and a well measured pace not burdened with inane dialog.
I'm looking forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
GT thanks.

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by rightbank12/21/16

We are no longer playing in the small town league

The focus just turned Global?
An Interesting expansion of the storyline.

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by arrowglass12/28/16

Just what I like reading!

A real interesting story that grows...has it's sensual parts...characters that I enjoy...and a plot line that can expand! Well done!

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