Thanks for this story! So totally hot!
" I am a musician turned ad man" Huh?
Musician who once made a living through music but now makes a living in advertising. Is that really a head scratcher?
Then why didn't you say "I am a musician that once made a living through music but now makes a living in advertising." Insult your readers when YOU provide them the entertainment, which you choose to do so for free, is bullshit. There was no criticism in that post.
Different perspectives. I think I was just trying to be succinct in terms of my main characters background...but maybe that was lazy of me, a distinct possibility always!
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Love this story!
Thanks for this story! So totally hot!
" I am a musician turned ad man"
Huh?
Musician turned ad man...
Musician who once made a living through music but now makes a living in advertising. Is that really a head scratcher?
Re: Is that really a head scratcher?
Then why didn't you say "I am a musician that once made a living through music but now makes a living in advertising."
Insult your readers when YOU provide them the entertainment, which you choose to do so for free, is bullshit. There was no criticism in that post.
Interesting
Different perspectives. I think I was just trying to be succinct in terms of my main characters background...but maybe that was lazy of me, a distinct possibility always!
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