Why do you put ""story not true"" -- made up..?? Duh -- you did not think we would not know that.? That is about as bad as all of these 'people are over "18" in this story'..!** I will skip your writings and not read anymore of your stories for a few years until you learn to write.! Please leave out any of the other crap in the future as we are not under "18"..! LOL
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Not a bad first story.
You did very good for a first story .It was a fun read hope you plan to write some more .Would have given it a 5 for a first time writer .
I liked it ...
4* - I would have given ....
Why ......
Why do you put ""story not true"" -- made up..?? Duh -- you did not think we would not know that.? That is about as bad as all of these 'people are over "18" in this story'..!** I will skip your writings and not read anymore of your stories for a few years until you learn to write.! Please leave out any of the other crap in the future as we are not under "18"..! LOL
Wow
Soooo turned on......NOT.
@ women, every man’s dream!!1
Sure would love to have been the man in this story!!!
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