I can't imagine what made you think you should write. If you don't speak any better than you write, how did you imagine this would be interesting?
Just a simple question: Why in hell is this in LW? No wives, no girlfriends, just two single barmaids who suck client's cocks...1*
Smartest person in the story is John
It doesn't fit. He just stood up and dropped his pants? She was so overcome by the sight of his cock she just couldn't resist? What are you....13? 1*
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Not sure what prompted this
I can't imagine what made you think you should write. If you don't speak any better than you write, how did you imagine this would be interesting?
Just a simple question...
Just a simple question: Why in hell is this in LW? No wives, no girlfriends, just two single barmaids who suck client's cocks...1*
I think the
Smartest person in the story is John
Why is this in LW
It doesn't fit.
He just stood up and dropped his pants? She was so overcome by the sight of his cock she just couldn't resist?
What are you....13?
1*
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