All Comments on 'Dear Abby'

by Vynter

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maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
I wanted to share this.

I fixated on your chair with a view, be glad youcan stay erect that long. We spend our adolescence hidding our boners only to lose the ability once we are brave enought to show him off. *~*,

Now a tip I wrote a lot of sentences. Tape or rubber band 3 or 4 pencils together butt angle them to fit the line spacing, think triangle> youcan write 4 lines at a time

PaxNurglePaxNurgleover 7 years ago
It was a good start...

I felt like this was a good start, it was pretty hot and exciting...right up until the end. Then it just tapered off and I kind of felt let down- much like the protagonist, I guess. The story just feels unfinished to me, like it had a great build up, it was going somewhere, but then it just stopped.

MrMotoMikeMrMotoMikeover 2 years ago

Good story - I like the detail of writing lines while naked and hard - sounds like the lady enjoys keeping him in that state.

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