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All Comments on 'Slaked Hungers'

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jthserrajthserraalmost 20 years ago
A sensual music here...

the enthralling language enhanced the poem with just the sound of the words. A touch of internal rhyme added a sparkle. Well done.

jim : )

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Another...

...elegant and melodious offering from a writer who is making a habit of it!

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years ago
sweet music

to the senses....blue

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
How

did I miss this one? Lovely word play and I love the rhymes.

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