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Make Myself a Sandwich

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by Anonymous11/23/16

Too short. This is not a story.

As above.

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by Anonymous11/29/16

Not Only Too Short...

...but this style of "first person removed" writing is annoying as hell - and seems to be becoming the fall-back style for Lit "writers" who can't write.

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