As above.
...but this style of "first person removed" writing is annoying as hell - and seems to be becoming the fall-back style for Lit "writers" who can't write.
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Too short. This is not a story.
As above.
Not Only Too Short...
...but this style of "first person removed" writing is annoying as hell - and seems to be becoming the fall-back style for Lit "writers" who can't write.
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