Good story, maybe a little short, seems to be the beginning of a series.
Let's hope it is so and the author tells us more about this story.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
Well, the introduction of the Coachman was a bit odd. Especially with them not doing anything but going back into the sitting room. However, it was quite a nice little romantic moment for Tom and Noelle. Very pleasing story.
great start
at least i hope it is just the start?
oh yes, I meant wyes
WELL, YES, CIRCUMSTANCES ORDAINED IT, AND YES IT WOULD HAVE BEEN
Great
A Christmas story to warm the heart (and other parts).
Merry Christmas!!!
Wonderful job, maybe a little swift on the finish. Never did finish the coachman's story though. Still gave you 5 *'s.
Good story
Good story, maybe a little short, seems to be the beginning of a series.
Let's hope it is so and the author tells us more about this story.
5* for you.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.
nice one
if a trifle brief.
Thank you
73
HP
Lovely story
I enjoyed Tom and Noelle, nicely done!
Interesting if not Odd
Well, the introduction of the Coachman was a bit odd. Especially with them not doing anything but going back into the sitting room. However, it was quite a nice little romantic moment for Tom and Noelle. Very pleasing story.
Cute. Fun.
More cheffy than sexy...but, on the whole?
A short and sweet story. Thanks!
I'm wanting more...so it's working!
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