All Comments on 'Prison Works'

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aacoolaacoolalmost 20 years ago
Good beginning

Good beginning - didn't really need to be broken into two parts - kinda spoilt the build-up. Can't wait

Gus AsparGus Asparalmost 20 years ago
yum yum!

Very nice! I'd be happy to call round and fuck her any time!

Mr RobertMr Robertabout 19 years ago
Enjoy yourself

Enjoyed your story so far, good plot, well written.

Looking forward to part two.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
The waste of cum was your father knocking up your mother annony you asshole

He should have just jerked off. You're scum to the world and the asshole of lit. gave it a 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
☆☆☆☆ (4): In spite of some shortcomings, the story is EROTIC because it depicts the innermost world of a sexualy deprived woman

THE wife is discovering her own KINKY SIDE. That aspect is the strong side of the story. As a wife she is not a keeper... but, given a chance, i would fuck her.

It is not clear why her husband would get 8 years in a maximum security prison for drunk driving & endangering lives ("no serious injuries").

He could end up in jail, & might be raped there ("...comes with the territory").

Story tags are out to lunch: they could pertain to a vignette describing a day in the life of an old person stroking a dog.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Same tsk tsk

Just another black cock white slut story.....

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