by emisweetie
Good beginning - didn't really need to be broken into two parts - kinda spoilt the build-up. Can't wait
Enjoyed your story so far, good plot, well written.
Looking forward to part two.
He should have just jerked off. You're scum to the world and the asshole of lit. gave it a 5
THE wife is discovering her own KINKY SIDE. That aspect is the strong side of the story. As a wife she is not a keeper... but, given a chance, i would fuck her.
It is not clear why her husband would get 8 years in a maximum security prison for drunk driving & endangering lives ("no serious injuries").
He could end up in jail, & might be raped there ("...comes with the territory").
Story tags are out to lunch: they could pertain to a vignette describing a day in the life of an old person stroking a dog.