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by Anonymous

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by 06/06/04

Brushfire! Brushfire!

Mr Bush is on brushfire!

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by cantdog06/06/04

Clear writing, clever point

Spot on.

The same point could easily be made about a creator. Just because someone has the tech to seed a ball of wet rock with life in seven days implies little about their other attributes. Imputing perfect goodness or omniscience to such a one is ridiculous.

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by 06/06/04

Thought provoking.

Not my usual read, though I'm glad I did. No one will ever accuse you of lingering 'inside the box'.

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by 06/07/04

Hmmm

LC, tritely clever, slightly humourous. Have to be honest. I know a little geology so the S. Andreas Fault and the volcano activities do not jibe. Some good sentences and phrases; could be worked at a bit more, but you seem to have arrived at your goal.

Keep at it, Perdita

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