No comments...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
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Anonymous11/23/16
1*
cuck shit.
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Anonymous11/23/16
Tale loved by the...
emotionally, morally, mentally, intellectually deprived (as is this author).
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Anonymous11/23/16
again not a single character that you can respect or like
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Anonymous11/23/16
A Studio Session
Interesting that there are six comments - one positive, five very negative, but the story is scoring 3.40 (not the 1.66 you might expect). It confirms what many of us suspect that a minority routinely one star Loving Wives stories which involve wife sharing or cuckoldry.
My own take was that it was a good story but spoilt by the fact that too much happened too quickly. It would have been more believable and more erotic if Anne had required more convincing/seduction.
Still I'm looking forward to the next part and hope that Mike gets to reclaim his wife when she has another man's sperm in her pussy.
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Anonymous11/23/16
Wonderful
About time we had a loving wife have sex with another man.This is what a loving wife does.To bad most here read the story,J.O. feel guilty then post hate comments..
No body made you come here and read the story...
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Anonymous11/23/16
Here we go, again . . .,
all British husbands are cuckolds, and all British wives are whores. We get it.
Happy St. Patrick's Day
Hasn't this plot been done enough? Its like a McDonald's hamburger, no matter how boring, contrived, or redundant, there's always a sucker willing to swallow the next serving.
As always, most of the negative comments are from anonymous assholes. WHY THE FUCK DO YOU READ THE STORY??? In the description of the story, if they have half a brain, they should know what's going to transpire, but yet the read it and give comment like cuck! Duh, what the hell did you think she was going to do, wear a nuns habit? It's call Literotica for a reason, if you don't like that kind of story, maybe they you should go the the children's section of Barnes and Noble! GROW UP, and if you don't have the balls to leave your name, don't comment!
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Anonymous11/23/16
Probable true wishes of sexy men
Almost every man would absolutely love to be the volunteer stud!!
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Anonymous11/23/16
@baranbrat
If you really 'can't believe it' then you aren't thinking too clearly. Readers' motivations on this site have been discussed ad nauseam and are well-understood.
Telling others to 'grow up' and the intemperance of your comments reveals a lot about yourself, none of it flattering.
The story has a very familiar theme and was quite well-written. It was just insufficiently intriguing to make me want to read any continuation.
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Anonymous11/23/16
Re: @baranbrat
I think this is a democratic site or you advise it to be a dictatorship where only readers liking the stories can comment? If it's a free site all readers can read and comment all stories...So you better get a life...
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Anonymous11/23/16
What an idiotic bunch of crap!!! MINUS 5*!!!
What a man would huckster his wife to others in that form??!! Only real perverts or insane idiots!!! Whould you live with a partner who sells you for his amusement?? Would you live with a wife who fucks others for photos!!! I think you crap funded on lechery and nothing else!!! Poor writing!!!
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Anonymous11/23/16
God, what a pile of crap!
This story reads like it was written by a degenerate 12 yr. old.
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Anonymous11/23/16
Let the author alone
He wants to write the next chapter because he is the narrator and wants to let everyone know that he is going to be Stewarts model in the next chapter and his wife gets to watch the three guys go at it...... jeezzz I gotta puke
I have no problem with people posting negative comments, just have the balls to put your name behind your comment, WHAT A FUCKING PUSSY! Grow a pair unless you're bent over taking it in the ass, you wuss!
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Anonymous11/23/16
@baranbrat
Your name is baranbrat? That's what's on your birth certificate? What's your address and phone number? You're just as anonymous as anyone else on here. Grow up, dude. Just because you're a cuck doesn't mean you have to be an asshole cuck. Maybe if the "father" line on that birth certificate with baranbrat on it hadn't read, "Unknown" you wouldn't be so insecure.
Bravo author! You’re right on with your comment to RE: Anonymous. Too bad they won’t catch on. Like the useful idiots we see, on TV, protesting against everything, they seem to have destroying the best internet site for new writers to practice their craft as their goal, and unfortunately Laural and her partners continue to allow them to succeed.
Just recently I happened upon an archive site with LW stories from 2000 to 2008. It was very interesting to see the very similar stories that we read on LW today, but back then a score of 3.5 to 4.5 was the norm, with many in the upper range. The writing was no better than today’s, so the difference has to be the class of people reading. Since then we’ve raised a generation where far too many act like children when they don’t get their way. (To you Anons, who claim your right to non-constructive negative comments—yes, you have the right to comment as you please; but what do you think it says to others when you continue to read stories you don’t like, and then try to discourage the writers? Step back and look at things from a different perspective; you see a man take a spoonful of soup, spit it out, gag and say, “My God that’s awful.” and then he takes another and another, continuing to gag and spit it out. What would you judge him to be—stupid maybe? At best you have to agree he wouldn’t be too bright. Well my friends, you are that person, so have fun 1-bombing my next story; it’s almost ready.)
Baranbrat, I find this to be a well written, entertaining fictional story. I’m looking forward to the next chapter. (JUST CHECKED YOUR BIO PAGE) Man! If your under 4.5 stories had a green flag, your list would look like a Christmas Tree! I wonder if your critics knew enough to check your Bio before they showed their ignorance. I say it’s a solid 4.6 or .7, (it’s not perfect), but since I can’t break it down that far, I rounded to a 5.
So this time I showed my ignorance; I got baranbrat mixed up with the author cuckandy. Everything I said still goes; baranbrat is still one hell of a writer and cuckandy has written a good story, made even better by the fact it's his first. Keep writing, ca I'm looking for your next chapter.
This is the best story I've read in quite a while...hurry with the next chapter please.
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Anonymous11/24/16
Uninteresting brain sugar
Typical garbage from the cum-slurper crowd. Carolina Dreamer shows his appalling ignorance. The reason Baronbrat has high scores is because Laurel and Associates give people like him those scores. If you want to know the real scores, check them three days after Baronbrat posts. That's before Laurel and Associates throw out all the one and two votes his stories get. Everyone knows the stupid bastard is a joke, and you're right behind him with you pompous windbag.
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Anonymous11/24/16
Cuck stories are one thing
but they still should be half way believable. Do you REALLY think a photographer would open himself up to dozens of lawsuits and take a chance on losing his business by putting a camera in the women's dressing room? Come on!
It was more like here big bad wolf take my wife. Seriously, after holding the guys cock for 2 seconds shes craving it. And letting both them take her...when it was supposed to only be the photigrapher, well it is a story. A bad one, and one dommed to kill a once very happy mariage. Sorry but cuckold stories end in heartache for the cuckold.
As others have said:
- There have been many similar stories of wives
having sex with photographers.
- This wife went very quickly from innocent clothed
poses to being photographed having sex.
It seems to me that the most successful stories of this genre proceed in very small steps, from the wife's unsuspecting innocence to willing participant, with each step described in titillating detail.
It's a bit difficult to set the scene and then go through that detail in only a bit over one page as this story has attempted to do.
To all anonnys too obtuse to know the difference between themselves and registered commenters whose true identity is not public knowledge: please make more of an effort to learn to think analytically (and critically in the classical sense) before responding to this or any other message in your typical intellectually lazy fashion, "Same as you!"
Anonymous blowhard trolls--readers and/or commenters who make absolutely NO effort to improve this site other than by tearing down writers whose content they disapprove of--are totally indistinguishable from one another. Rather than having hidden your identity, you have simply seen fit to identify yourselves with the stupid mass of anonymous cows known as The Herd.
In an auto race, you are the lapped cars.
In a horse race, you're the field, unworthy of a betting line.
In an election, you'd be a write-in candidate --except, since you are anonymous, you'd have to be "none of the above."
You call yourselves Democracy? No, I have respect for democracy. A better name for you is Anarchy because you make no effort to improve your environment nor take accountability for your words. Therefore no respect is due you.
You want your opinion to be considered? You want your words and thoughts to make a difference? You want to engage in conversation instead of throwing Internet hand grenades?
I agree with other comments that the pacing was a little rushed. It's not usually a good sign when an author uses "fast forward " multiple times even though it is consistent to the content.
A wife whose reluctance meter shifts sooo dramatically can be an awesome story but we like to be titillated more with the progression.
I have no problem with this plot being familiar. Seductions usually follow patterns of behavior so as long as it is somewhat believable I'm okay with it.
4*
A good story, carried out efficiently. What would make it better would be taking some time with the wife's responses. We don't know how she's doing getting taken by the two men much, other than sounds, mostly, and then they dress. Looking forward to the the continuation.
I found the story to be quite arousing, a nice read. Appreciated that the author moved it along quickly. I like the theme a lot which helped me select it, and then appreciate it. To those who seem to think that a sexual fantasy needs to be "realistic", i say "who cares"? Not me! it's a fantasy! So what if the wife's reaction might not happen in a for real situation? Thanks for sharing this kinky fantasy, and for writing it well too!
Shut your face idiot. Quit your constant whining. Did anybody force you to read the comments? That you favor this shit speaks volumes where your mind is. Idiot.
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Anonymous01/21/17
Typical
Typical UK wimp loser shit married to a cheating cunt.....
English
Good Start
Look forward to see what happens to Anne.
Loving Wife?
Surely this is not a loving wife story???
No comments...
No comments...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
1*
cuck shit.
Tale loved by the...
emotionally, morally, mentally, intellectually deprived (as is this author).
again not a single character that you can respect or like
A Studio Session
Interesting that there are six comments - one positive, five very negative, but the story is scoring 3.40 (not the 1.66 you might expect). It confirms what many of us suspect that a minority routinely one star Loving Wives stories which involve wife sharing or cuckoldry.
My own take was that it was a good story but spoilt by the fact that too much happened too quickly. It would have been more believable and more erotic if Anne had required more convincing/seduction.
Still I'm looking forward to the next part and hope that Mike gets to reclaim his wife when she has another man's sperm in her pussy.
Wonderful
About time we had a loving wife have sex with another man.This is what a loving wife does.To bad most here read the story,J.O. feel guilty then post hate comments..
No body made you come here and read the story...
Here we go, again . . .,
all British husbands are cuckolds, and all British wives are whores. We get it.
Happy St. Patrick's Day
Hasn't this plot been done enough? Its like a McDonald's hamburger, no matter how boring, contrived, or redundant, there's always a sucker willing to swallow the next serving.
I can't Believe these comments
As always, most of the negative comments are from anonymous assholes. WHY THE FUCK DO YOU READ THE STORY??? In the description of the story, if they have half a brain, they should know what's going to transpire, but yet the read it and give comment like cuck! Duh, what the hell did you think she was going to do, wear a nuns habit? It's call Literotica for a reason, if you don't like that kind of story, maybe they you should go the the children's section of Barnes and Noble! GROW UP, and if you don't have the balls to leave your name, don't comment!
Probable true wishes of sexy men
Almost every man would absolutely love to be the volunteer stud!!
@baranbrat
If you really 'can't believe it' then you aren't thinking too clearly. Readers' motivations on this site have been discussed ad nauseam and are well-understood.
Telling others to 'grow up' and the intemperance of your comments reveals a lot about yourself, none of it flattering.
The story has a very familiar theme and was quite well-written. It was just insufficiently intriguing to make me want to read any continuation.
Re: @baranbrat
I think this is a democratic site or you advise it to be a dictatorship where only readers liking the stories can comment? If it's a free site all readers can read and comment all stories...So you better get a life...
What an idiotic bunch of crap!!! MINUS 5*!!!
What a man would huckster his wife to others in that form??!! Only real perverts or insane idiots!!! Whould you live with a partner who sells you for his amusement?? Would you live with a wife who fucks others for photos!!! I think you crap funded on lechery and nothing else!!! Poor writing!!!
God, what a pile of crap!
This story reads like it was written by a degenerate 12 yr. old.
Let the author alone
He wants to write the next chapter because he is the narrator and wants to let everyone know that he is going to be Stewarts model in the next chapter and his wife gets to watch the three guys go at it...... jeezzz I gotta puke
RE: Anonymous Prick!
I have no problem with people posting negative comments, just have the balls to put your name behind your comment, WHAT A FUCKING PUSSY! Grow a pair unless you're bent over taking it in the ass, you wuss!
@baranbrat
Your name is baranbrat? That's what's on your birth certificate? What's your address and phone number? You're just as anonymous as anyone else on here. Grow up, dude. Just because you're a cuck doesn't mean you have to be an asshole cuck. Maybe if the "father" line on that birth certificate with baranbrat on it hadn't read, "Unknown" you wouldn't be so insecure.
MORE!
Bravo author! You’re right on with your comment to RE: Anonymous. Too bad they won’t catch on. Like the useful idiots we see, on TV, protesting against everything, they seem to have destroying the best internet site for new writers to practice their craft as their goal, and unfortunately Laural and her partners continue to allow them to succeed.
Just recently I happened upon an archive site with LW stories from 2000 to 2008. It was very interesting to see the very similar stories that we read on LW today, but back then a score of 3.5 to 4.5 was the norm, with many in the upper range. The writing was no better than today’s, so the difference has to be the class of people reading. Since then we’ve raised a generation where far too many act like children when they don’t get their way. (To you Anons, who claim your right to non-constructive negative comments—yes, you have the right to comment as you please; but what do you think it says to others when you continue to read stories you don’t like, and then try to discourage the writers? Step back and look at things from a different perspective; you see a man take a spoonful of soup, spit it out, gag and say, “My God that’s awful.” and then he takes another and another, continuing to gag and spit it out. What would you judge him to be—stupid maybe? At best you have to agree he wouldn’t be too bright. Well my friends, you are that person, so have fun 1-bombing my next story; it’s almost ready.)
Baranbrat, I find this to be a well written, entertaining fictional story. I’m looking forward to the next chapter. (JUST CHECKED YOUR BIO PAGE) Man! If your under 4.5 stories had a green flag, your list would look like a Christmas Tree! I wonder if your critics knew enough to check your Bio before they showed their ignorance. I say it’s a solid 4.6 or .7, (it’s not perfect), but since I can’t break it down that far, I rounded to a 5.
SORRY ABOUT THAT!
So this time I showed my ignorance; I got baranbrat mixed up with the author cuckandy. Everything I said still goes; baranbrat is still one hell of a writer and cuckandy has written a good story, made even better by the fact it's his first. Keep writing, ca I'm looking for your next chapter.
Once again, sorry about the mix up.
So let me get this straight
This photographer has a well planned out seduction routine that succeeds.
And then they do it on the hard dirty floor???? Why would they not have a comfy bed???
Great 5* story cuckandy.
This is the best story I've read in quite a while...hurry with the next chapter please.
Uninteresting brain sugar
Typical garbage from the cum-slurper crowd. Carolina Dreamer shows his appalling ignorance. The reason Baronbrat has high scores is because Laurel and Associates give people like him those scores. If you want to know the real scores, check them three days after Baronbrat posts. That's before Laurel and Associates throw out all the one and two votes his stories get. Everyone knows the stupid bastard is a joke, and you're right behind him with you pompous windbag.
Cuck stories are one thing
but they still should be half way believable. Do you REALLY think a photographer would open himself up to dozens of lawsuits and take a chance on losing his business by putting a camera in the women's dressing room? Come on!
The whole story was ridiculous.
This was not a seduction
It was more like here big bad wolf take my wife. Seriously, after holding the guys cock for 2 seconds shes craving it. And letting both them take her...when it was supposed to only be the photigrapher, well it is a story. A bad one, and one dommed to kill a once very happy mariage. Sorry but cuckold stories end in heartache for the cuckold.
Take it slow
As others have said:
- There have been many similar stories of wives
having sex with photographers.
- This wife went very quickly from innocent clothed
poses to being photographed having sex.
It seems to me that the most successful stories of this genre proceed in very small steps, from the wife's unsuspecting innocence to willing participant, with each step described in titillating detail.
It's a bit difficult to set the scene and then go through that detail in only a bit over one page as this story has attempted to do.
Lue
re: multiple anonnys
To all anonnys too obtuse to know the difference between themselves and registered commenters whose true identity is not public knowledge: please make more of an effort to learn to think analytically (and critically in the classical sense) before responding to this or any other message in your typical intellectually lazy fashion, "Same as you!"
Anonymous blowhard trolls--readers and/or commenters who make absolutely NO effort to improve this site other than by tearing down writers whose content they disapprove of--are totally indistinguishable from one another. Rather than having hidden your identity, you have simply seen fit to identify yourselves with the stupid mass of anonymous cows known as The Herd.
In an auto race, you are the lapped cars.
In a horse race, you're the field, unworthy of a betting line.
In an election, you'd be a write-in candidate --except, since you are anonymous, you'd have to be "none of the above."
You call yourselves Democracy? No, I have respect for democracy. A better name for you is Anarchy because you make no effort to improve your environment nor take accountability for your words. Therefore no respect is due you.
You want your opinion to be considered? You want your words and thoughts to make a difference? You want to engage in conversation instead of throwing Internet hand grenades?
Log in.
a little rushed but good
I agree with other comments that the pacing was a little rushed. It's not usually a good sign when an author uses "fast forward " multiple times even though it is consistent to the content.
A wife whose reluctance meter shifts sooo dramatically can be an awesome story but we like to be titillated more with the progression.
I have no problem with this plot being familiar. Seductions usually follow patterns of behavior so as long as it is somewhat believable I'm okay with it.
4*
Reactions
A good story, carried out efficiently. What would make it better would be taking some time with the wife's responses. We don't know how she's doing getting taken by the two men much, other than sounds, mostly, and then they dress. Looking forward to the the continuation.
Not realistic? Who cares?
I found the story to be quite arousing, a nice read. Appreciated that the author moved it along quickly. I like the theme a lot which helped me select it, and then appreciate it. To those who seem to think that a sexual fantasy needs to be "realistic", i say "who cares"? Not me! it's a fantasy! So what if the wife's reaction might not happen in a for real situation? Thanks for sharing this kinky fantasy, and for writing it well too!
Thanks
Great start. Please keep on.
Very Arousing
How soon can we read part 2????
re: anonymous-wonderful
Shut your face idiot. Quit your constant whining. Did anybody force you to read the comments? That you favor this shit speaks volumes where your mind is. Idiot.
Typical
Typical UK wimp loser shit married to a cheating cunt.....
Interesting story
Impatiently waiting for chapter 2
more please
Looking forward to chapter 2, at least!
Great possibilities for more
Looking forward to chapter 2, maybe 3.
Cuckold
Another stupid cuck whose brains I in his cock end.
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