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by Anonymous06/08/04

Especially hot

Encore une fois, foxxy lady:

I must say you write well, using literary devices in interesting ways (i.e. the similie, "Her skirt was like a second layer of skin" Now that's a really interesting suggested comparison! ).

But this story is just plain HOT. PERIOD. I hope there is a sequel, one in which the beautiful dark lover wraps her "long, beautiful" legs around her "hardworking, White" lover and, well, has her "very, very wet" pussy filled to overflowing with his hot cum.

One thinks they both would like that, and I believe the dark and beautiful lover would like the feel of her own cum AND that of her lovers dripping down her lovely ass, too.

That having been said, the tenderness and respect between the two lovers make this an especially erotic story...AND HOT, TOO!!

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by Anonymous10/26/04

To-mmm likes it

Very hot story....one that you hope cums true for someone everyday!

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