All Comments on 'Laid Bare'

very nice slave girl.

I love it. It makes me feel and begin to understand where you're coming from. :)

always a *pleasure* to see you in motion..

Don't read much poetry but this was different-an insight I guess-besides, WriterDom liked it and who am I to argue with that one-excellent job!

You already know my inner feelings on your poem, Silky One... and those feelings I've only shared with you...

For, inasmuch as I already have a clue to, or handle on, some of how you think, feel, act, and react... this is, indeed, a testament to the inner feelings of the soul of the one I call "Sweet Sister of my Soul"...

For, as we have discovered... there are many similarities between your soul and mine... and the link that ties them.

I truly love your newest work... for it speaks volumes in its simplicity. One only has to "listen"... and they will hear it.

Bellisima, cara mia!!

That was one of the best pieces I have read in along time. Tis easy to see the words are truly heart felt.I look forward to your future work.

A wonderful work KC. I can see that you have alot of talent for this. I hope we'll be seeing more from you in the future. A wonderfully written and emotion filled piece.

Thanks for letting us look at your guts. I can see your writing is a good way to come to terms with living and loving. Keep writing I will keep reading.

I love KC. Great look into your mind.

Thank you for sharing.

KC...very revealing poem. Insightful, raw, powerful. We haven't really spoken one on one...but I am glad to have read this as it gives me further insight into the person you are. Thank you.

Thesandman

This poem draws a dark melancholy picture. It hits home. I love it Callista!

That is all I can say... wonderful! The rest is speechless...

I have felt that at times but never to that extreme. You are very talented love and I can not wait to read more of your journey in poetry form.

Kajira honey, we have spoken before and I already knew of your leanings but, this expressed the real you far more succinctly than you have ever done before when we were just chatting! I have written poetry myself shortly after my wife died but, it came nowhere near the excellence of this piece, well done honey. Salami xxx

That gave me chills.

Very incitive

KC, This is wonderful! You have put those feelings so clearly and beautifully into words. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem!

Your work was very good, and very insightful. Thanks for sharing.

the end was beautiful...perfect...

To read this, is to see, feel and taste the passion of the human spirit in such a special way, that when you are done reading, you know you have stood on sacred ground.

My deepest thanks to you KC

you showed so much of what is in your heart.

i hope you have the master you crave so deeply.

An evocative, emotionally vivid poem.