All Comments on 'Big Hats'

by Randi Grail

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
A...

....second fine offering from this new poet today. A very good read!

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
this is wonderful

sweet, well written, poetic, just everything about it is so nice.

LiarLiaralmost 20 years ago
Good analogy.

Yes...haven't we all been caught some time, being big pretty hats, fluttering about in the wind, heading for that puddle? I know I have.

Senna JawaSenna Jawaalmost 20 years ago
If you just said

big hats on a windy day

fall into the puddles

(and no more)

minsueminsuealmost 20 years ago
Have you met Lit's curmudgeon-in-residence?

Ignore him, sweetie. He can give good advice at times, but it's always wrapped in thorns. In this particular case it's not even good advice.

- Mindy

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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SJ may have got it right

But not everything austere feels right;

Sometimes the pleasure's in the frills

A little added sensual thrill.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Fun Read.

Wearing a hat on a windy day ~ an exercise in caution.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
IN YOUR EASTER BONNET

with mud and dirty water on it, TK U MLJ LV NV

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