All Comments on 'The Forgotten Bride'

I don't think I will ever be able to go into a bar again.

My name is vampire Lestit. I'm a goddamn rock star!

I like the tone and feeling of it, but I wonder what it was about her that made her the forgotten bride. Why was she any less noticed than his other brides? Was she simply the only one left from that nest? Did whomever killed him kill everyone but her? Just some thoughts if you wanted to continue on. It's a good stand-alone piece as well... I'm just a bit intruiged by some of the possibilities.

Very well done, it held my attention, I wanted more, left me wondering and wanting to know more about her.

You're a great writer And poet.

Very impressive!! Loved the story hon. ;-)

You kept me intrigued. I loved the line, "It's a place to deafen your soul." Terrific writing. ~Minx

creepy but i like it so far.

Short but very sweet indeed!

The first Erotic Horror thing I click on and it feels like it's embracing my core, and beautifully written too.