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by NiceBHM4U11/24/16

Bravo

Extremely well written. I hope to see more of your work.

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by ReiDeBastos11/25/16

Very nicely done!

My only nit-pick: It's not "wet suite", it's "wetsuit" (one word, no "e" at the end).

Other than that, I really enjoyed it: interesting location/situation, nice dialog. I think that more insight into what they were thinking might have made it even better.

-Rei

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by OldeGold11/25/16

Well done!

Nice story, really well put together

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