All Comments on 'Winter Swimmers'

Extremely well written. I hope to see more of your work.

My only nit-pick: It's not "wet suite", it's "wetsuit" (one word, no "e" at the end).

Other than that, I really enjoyed it: interesting location/situation, nice dialog. I think that more insight into what they were thinking might have made it even better.

-Rei

Nice story, really well put together

I loved the slow, gentle buildup. A pleasure to read.