My only nit-pick: It's not "wet suite", it's "wetsuit" (one word, no "e" at the end).
Other than that, I really enjoyed it: interesting location/situation, nice dialog. I think that more insight into what they were thinking might have made it even better.
English
Bravo
Extremely well written. I hope to see more of your work.
Very nicely done!
My only nit-pick: It's not "wet suite", it's "wetsuit" (one word, no "e" at the end).
Other than that, I really enjoyed it: interesting location/situation, nice dialog. I think that more insight into what they were thinking might have made it even better.
-Rei
Well done!
Nice story, really well put together
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