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Better every day
Every day this story improves. I really enjoy reading each chapter. It seems as if the author was writing this story for me. I'm sure it's not like that, but thanks anyway.
5 * for you, and waiting for the next delivery.
I apologize for my English (yet), it is not my native language.
The dialog
Is what makes this great. The joking back and forth seems real. Just enough location background to not overwhelm the characters, nice family and friends use without letting the focus drift.
And a bonus of chapters posted daily.
What's not to like.
Thank you.
Wonderful Story!
With every chapter this story just gets better & better! IMHO it is one of the best written stories ever on this site! If 10 stars were possible I would give the author an 11!
You're doing something special
Just keeps getting better and better.
Wonderful story
An excellent story well told.
I'm looking forward to the next installments. Each published part seems to be slightly better than the last, even though the previous was excellent.
Please don't end it right now, We need an installement
The story is excellent and well paced. I hope you can drop the installments quickly as I never did well with waiting.
best one yet
just the right touch of humour and romance.
Of Midnight mass.
I'm thoroughly enjoying your story, I look forward to pt 6 ! A nice mixture of memories for me
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