All Comments on 'An Unexpected Encounter'

Loved your story. I have only let two men cum in my mouth, and both were accidental. I did not want them to cum in my mouth, but when your the bottom of a 69? It just happened, and because it was so far in the back of my mouth. I did not even taste it. When I have tasted a large amount of pre-cum, I usually end up choking and spitting. What is the trick of tolerating the taste?

Sentence construction and misused words, need attention,

"I did all king of funny movements"

"I'll very happy enjoying it in all the way possible"

"I heard a slight whistling me"

"He peeled my cock and stated licking"

Did you re-read it before submitting it?

This entry would have improved with some editing It sounds like a scene that has potential but looks to be written with undeveloped language skills.

Mistakes distract from reading enjoyment.

Find an editor and this will improve.

The story was a good one, but it was almost impossible to follow due to very poor grammar and obvious lack of editing.

Good story , felt like I was the third person ,diapointed I want some.

That’s proof positive everyone should try at least ☝️ as it may lead to two then who knows?