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by tarablackwood2206/02/04

Fine...

...effort. Love the contrast presented suddenly in the last verse! This poet progresses with every poem. Keep it going!

Edit 'a' to 'an' in 5th line, and 7th line to 'like a whisper through leaves.'

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by twelveoone07/01/04

This is great

for what it is
nice lines, nice change of direction
very funny, caught me at the end

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