Virtue in Iniquity

That was a very interesting tale. Thank you.

Ahhh

What an interesting take on the human condition. Although I had a hard time warming up to the story's circumstances, the underlying relationships fascinated me. This is definitely a five-star story!

Well written

An unusual story for this site. Very well written. Your descriptions and dialogue draw me into the thoughts and feelings of these two people struggling to navigate life with it's pain, disappointments, hopes and dilemmas. You capture it well, leaving me with a multitude of wonderings, not because the story is incomplete or lacking, but because it is so full and engaging.

Well written; not really

You lost that at the first chapter title. 'Us' does not thanslate to 'you and I' but to 'me and you'. I'm sure there were more unfortunate construction after that, but not worth my effort to find out. *

Well written: grammar snobs be damned

This went no where I expected. And was not what I expected from you having read your other works. But it was VERY good.

Great

Totally unexpected. Very different than your other stories yet most satisfying.

Boyd Percy

Brilliant

I've made it a mission to read all your stories; the depths of your writing/stories is astounding. This one was so different from all others. I doubt readers will appreciate the research (or life knowledge) you must have/do to compose a story this deep. Yes, we live in an ever changing world, courtesy of the internet.

Brilliant - add

I forgot one thing this story, 'I first thought what the heck is?' It reminds me of how I was told about the Hobbit an adult (no sex) fantasy, I needed to read the first 100 pages and if you do not get it dump it, but by then you will be hooked, I was and read all of Tolkien. This story is much the same, 'read the first page', it will come clear.

M you have a unique way of starting this story, too bad if others don't get it. Salute.

Wow!

Beautifully written! Such an unexpected story! Thank you! So enjoyed where you took it and how it was left. I concur. Brilliant! Just Brilliant!