All Comments on 'Breaking My Own Rules Ch. 10'

by Chimera44

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desjdesjover 7 years ago

i love this story please update soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Please write a book!!!

I LOVE this story!! Please post the next part very soon. And write a book....I will buy it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Tom + sky

Is it weird I want them to be together. Please more of tom and sky not the others

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loving This Story

A really interesting take on the classical over the top stalker dom that is not uncommonly seen in BDSM stories, for once people are actually taking it seriously in a BDSM story which is nice to see. The writing is nice to read, with a good flow. Characters seem well done though fleshing out some of the side characters a bit more might help as at the moment our protagonist seems to be by far the most well developed character (understandably so, but side characters need love too). Overall a good read, keep up the good work :)

5/5 stars

p.s. I don't normally end up liking the secondary love interest but Francois is really growing on me as a stern yet nice dom, glad to see someone really make that work :)

BuckeyeAtHeartBuckeyeAtHeartover 7 years ago
Wow

How the hell can you juggle penning 3 stories at once??!?

AND each one is 'can't-put-it-down-til-you-finish' level?!

LOVE your writing!

Only wish you could write a chapter every day...for ALL 3 stories.

;)

CatsEye4477CatsEye4477over 7 years ago
Thank you...

... firstly, for *not* revealing any spoilers in earlier chapters in response to some of the comments about Tom's actions not being true BDSM. They were never meant to be, which we now know. Sometimes the best way to illustrate something is to show what it is not. You provided that perfectly.

... and secondly for writing this excellent story! I think you are a wonderful writer!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing!

I've gotta say, I love this story. You are a fantastic writer. I've been reading all of your series non stop. I haven't been able to put any of them down. Please post another chapter soon!

P.S. I agree you should write a book. I'd buy anything you wrote in a heartbeat.

Babyboo12Babyboo12over 7 years ago
Please continue

I love your story please continue it..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

I hope there's more to the story coming! I'm hooked and can't wait to see how it resolves!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dear Chimera44

Could you please give us an update about the next chapter? Ditto for Curing Erica's phobia.

Thank you.

HukilauHukilauover 7 years ago
Pls, this not the is it?

You haven't posted in a long time on the story. It cannot lie, Canet?

Chimera44Chimera44over 7 years agoAuthor
From the author

Chapter 11 will post on the 11th. Appropriate, no? Jessa and Erica chapters are in the works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sooo Hooked!

I'm absolutely hooked on this story! You have talent my dear. My only complaint is that I wish you would update more often. I really thought this started out as a one dimensional kinky little story like so many of the others. So glad I was wrong!

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