All Comments on 'Leather sighs'

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WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
this really is interesting

and I had to read your poem twice.

this stanza really grabs my attention:

That crackle as

the sticks are bundled

tied, those leather

sighs as the oil soaks

in , Minty

fiery all rampant in the Burn

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
The closer...

...you read, the hotter this gets. When the words are done you know what's next,.....and long as you imagine!

fawniefawniealmost 20 years ago
I too had to read it twice

i love it when i have to do that though..

this sizzles!

very pleasant read ty!

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