I really enjoyed this story. You're one of the few authors who can write things like, "She was so stuffed with wonderful male meat she could only shake her head," and make it erotic. Thanks!
I had a deep and abiding suspicion that despite the change in categories, this story would read like every other dr._mabeuse story...and I was right. The woman is, despite any pretentions at being someone in control and sure of what she wants, actually is merely a toy for the "right, strong" man to play with as he chooses. It reads almost like a romance novel with a bit of bdsm thrown in on top of the ludicrous reduction of men and women to simplistic "me Tarzan, you Jane" mentalities. The writing itself is a cut above what is generally found on lit due to its grammatical excellence, so I give it 3 stars. Otherwise, the fantasy is the simply a retread of every other story by this author.
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Miami will never be the same.
A luscious read. If only there were more nights like this one, Dr. Mabeuse. And more men with your instincts.
Very Erotic
I really enjoyed this story. You're one of the few authors who can write things like, "She was so stuffed with wonderful male meat she could only shake her head," and make it erotic. Thanks!
Oh. My. God.
Can I get the name of this hotel, please?
It's like you have a cunt
This is exactly how I want to be fucked. Your imagination is a beautiful thing.
Just another satisfied reader
You are such an artist, Doc. Honestly, no one does it like you.
This story reads like a Harliquin book. You're better than that.
Same old song
I had a deep and abiding suspicion that despite the change in categories, this story would read like every other dr._mabeuse story...and I was right. The woman is, despite any pretentions at being someone in control and sure of what she wants, actually is merely a toy for the "right, strong" man to play with as he chooses. It reads almost like a romance novel with a bit of bdsm thrown in on top of the ludicrous reduction of men and women to simplistic "me Tarzan, you Jane" mentalities. The writing itself is a cut above what is generally found on lit due to its grammatical excellence, so I give it 3 stars. Otherwise, the fantasy is the simply a retread of every other story by this author.
oh say what you will verbicide...
... my kingdom to have my vacations end like that...
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