All Comments on 'Immortal Gift of Beauty Ch. 02'

Been visiting your members page every few days since the previous chapter in hopes of seeing another one (also to read any of your other submissions).

Love the story, looking forward to reading more of it. I just hope I won't have to wait as long. ;)

I very good addition to this story! I can't wait for it to continue! Thank you!

Cannot wait till the next chapter what a way for Marina to find out about them. And both Henry and Brosie admitted that they love each other. I would love to see a possible 3 way between Henry Brosie and Marina? Plus it will be interesting to see when Henry's family finds out. Big things ahead. 5 stars as usual. Keep up the great writing.

So the sex was good but I'm honestly am more interested in how you break the relationship to Hank's parents next chapter. I'm incredibly amused with myself and you for writing a story on this site where i'm really interested in how you work out the plot more then the next chapters sex scene.

I enjoy your writing because - while it is always about fucking huge tits and great sex scenes - it is much more than that. Your plots are very, very good and always leave room for interesting turns, adventures, new ideas coming into the scene. Can I suggest a potential continue of the story: While a threesome with Marina would be some idea worth thinking about, I honestly cannot really imagine this due to the harsh character of Marina. I would suggest a fucking awesome threesome with an old girlfriend of Brossie (from schooldays...). She is similar to Brossie, but has a set of tits beyond belief (huuuuge!). What do you think ?

Great Chapter 2. Don't wait so long for ch 3

Great story, great characters, great sex scenes. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Like just about everybody else that commented ... Please Don't Wait So Long for The Next Chapter!!!!

Quickly becoming a favorite, which is saying something since you've got a deep catalog of amazing stories.

Love the story. Really enjoying your stories. Can't wait for the next one.

How old IS Brosie?Is she still young enough to get pregnant? That could be an interesting complication.

More!

Love it, but please don't go for any harem or incest route in this story. It just wouldn't fit at all, but since I saw a few flags pop up for that possibility, even though I find it unlikely you'd go there, I had to say something :)

I hope they'll just tell his family about their relationship instead of them 'finding it out on their own' by either walking in on them like Marina or catching looks between them and figuring it out. It would be awesome to just have them all around the table and seeing Marina's disappointed face she wasn't able to do more and just the shock on his mother and sisters faces.

For that guy who wanted a incest or harem route..

Worst taste ever, we are all here for single coupling why bother recommending a group sex..

Love your story writing skills. Very erotic. Bringing in the daughter and sister would be a interesting twist. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Soon I hope!

You are almost there yourself - fantastic flow !!

Lets hear how the pool relaxing and dinner works out, please !

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Not only is it hot as hell sex scenes but the twists and turns are a good read as well. As I'm a fan of incest it wouldn't bother me if you went with an incest threesome , but it doesn't fit the tone of the story at all. I'm excited for the fallout of when his family finds out. I just hope it's not as long of a wait as before, but good quality can't always be rushed.

Great, please need more thank you.

This is very good writing and a great story line. I like the characters and all the little potential twists...keep it up. ...Cheers

Her nastiness can hurt her mother even more.

Meanwhile, doesn't anyone have a summer job? No planning for fall semester? A car of their own? Actual friends?

and yes - he should have a summer job!!!

What a great storyline and I look forward to starting the next part.

Great storytelling very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

I gave Part 1 five stars - most enjoyable - well set up. Part 2 gets five as well - strictly for the well written and described very hot sex. But, the only love is that of the love of said sex. Infatuation is

a better way to describe the feelings of both the thirty-something, love starved widow, and a typical, though a bit more mature, horny teenager.

Hopefully parts 3 and 4 will develop their emotions of love on a much higher plane - intellectually, dating, socializing, all the activities, INCLUDING THE SEX, that lead to the true love they have proffered verbally, but not experientially.

The story gets even better for the two of them. Surely it will all come good in the end and their relationship will be excepted by the families. Thank you again for a great story.

Damn that ending is just evil.

This story gets better as it moves along.

I would live to see the bitch Marina get hers. She's obviously cultivating Sharon's friendship to make our protagonist uncomfortable at best. Don't know how to burn her, but would not let Sharon escape, as she and Hank obviously don't care for each other.